the amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in schools in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? do you think this the best way to deal with the problem? what other solutions can you suggest?

It is often argued that in order to approach the obesity issue in

children

, more time should be devoted to

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and exercise schools. Personally,

although

I agree it is highly beneficial, I perceive there are other ways to handle

this

problem as well. Considering the overweight

children

worldwide, it is evident that compared to some years ago their proportion has considerably increased. Perhaps the pupils’ unbalanced lifestyle can properly justify

this

phenomenon. Not only do

children

follow unhealthy

foods

, but

also

they have substituted indoor games for outdoor ones.

Therefore

, if the schools’ headmasters alter the curriculum’s plans into more physically active ones, the pupils will benefit and their

weight

will be reduced. To clarify it with an example, a survey conducted in a specific primary school in Shiraz revealed that not only will students lose

weight

with more

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classes, but

also

their educational outcomes will be improved

as a result

of a healthier body. Think there are some other advantageous works that can give a rise to

this

difficulty.

Firstly

, as it was aforementioned, unhealthy

foods

have a

further

detrimental effect on

this

issue.

Thus

, the introduction of a healthy diet at schools can be unimaginably effective. Alternative nutrients and low-calorie

foods

like fruits, vegetables and milk must be included in

this

diet. Meanwhile, students should be obliged to eat these

foods

instead

of harmful snacks.

Secondly

, it may not be wrong if I claim a majority of kids are not aware of the destructive difficulties that are associated with obesity and if their teachers inform them about these troubles, they will make an effort into controlling their

weight

and pursuing a healthy lifestyle.

For instance

, they can be told about

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heart disease and the breathing difficulties that are caused by high

weight

.

In other words

, sometimes consultations outperform obligations. To conclude, I would like to maintain that even though exercising at school helps

children

with an obesity problem, other methods including the introduction of healthy diets and warning them about the abominable outcomes can have a

further

effect.