You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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With the rising globalization and industrialization, the
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in the world is changing drastically and living beings are facing numerous threats.
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, majority of the
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hold the view that we should get adapted to
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instead
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of finding solutions to stop it. I completely disagree with the aforementioned view and the following essay will elaborate
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with examples. Commencing, with the developing world
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have created drastic changes to
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and today
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ate trying to live with it without finding solutions. When the world tries to develop overnight governments destroy natural lands to build buildings and fill oceans, and lakes will excess garbage which is emitted by factories.
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, different sectors of society have to face challenges
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as droughts that can harm food production and human health, and flooding that can spread and damage infrastructure. As an example, in Sri Lanka majority of the rural areas are destroyed by cutting down trees and filling up massive reservoirs with soil which ultimately leads to heavy droughts.
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,
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try to live with serious issues by neglecting them.
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, human health is a controversial issue that
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have to face today due to
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. Changes in weather and patterns have put lives at risk where the majority of
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are subjected to heat phenomena. As an example, today a plethora of children in middle eastern countries die due to heavy heat conditions where there is no food or water to drink.
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, dry weather conditions lead to wildfires and bushfires which bring many health risks. In conclusion, I believe that as a society
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should start preventing
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if
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condition continues in the future it's we who have to face the most vulnerable risks.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate resilience
  • mitigation measures
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainable practices
  • infrastructure adaptation
  • displaced communities
  • economic incentives
  • public health
  • international agreements
  • environmental regulations
  • biodiversity
  • future generations
  • green technology
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