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some people say that advertising is extremely successfull at persuading us to buy things. other peoplr think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it discuss both views and give your opinion

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Many people argue that advertisements have made the public purchase a lot of things, while others believe it has become too popular that society no longer minds it.
Although
 it has led to an unattractive environment, ln my opinion,
l
 believe it helps the public to become aware of different items. On one hand, one of the reasons why advertising has lost value is because it has created an unattractive environment in most countries. Companies who advertise their goods tend to use a lot of creativity in the community in order to make everyone able to read the advert and they are placed almost everywhere.
For example
, if the company decides to use posters and paints on walls to attract people's attention,
this
 not only pollutes the area but
also
 makes it untidy. Despite the above view, ln my opinion,
l
 believe that advertisements have enabled society to become aware of different items in different places.
That is
 to say, if business members come up with new items that will make people's lives become better,
such
 things must be broadcasted
such
 that the community can be sensitized about
it
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.
For instance
, when the Ugandans government wanted parents to accept the immunization of children, it decided to broadcast the news using every source of media and
this
 worked as parents accepted
to
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apply
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immunization of their children. In conclusion,
although
 popular advertising leads to a dirty place sometimes, ln my opinion,
l
 believe it is the best way that natives get to know about different things in their countries so
l
 hope in future the state accepts more advertisements.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer behavior
  • Marketing strategies
  • Brand awareness
  • Psychological impact
  • Target audience
  • Commercialization
  • Sensory overload
  • Selective perception
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Ad fatigue
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