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Questions: In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagee?

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It is believed
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some professionals, learning a foreign language at primary
schools
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 is better than secondary.
This
tend
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have
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 both merits and demerits. In my opinion, despite some
drawbacks
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 it is beneficial in numerous ways for students.
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 with, there are two major pros
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this
 notion.
First
, at a young age children have high grasping power due to which they can learn new things in lesser time.
For instance
, a four-year-old boy
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 to operate a mobile faster than a 40-year-old lady due to brain functionality. So, if a student learns a language at primary
school
 during his younger age, it takes less time as compared to
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 that at high
school
.
Secondly
, it would be beneficial for
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the student
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student
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students
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 if they plan to go abroad for higher studies and job opportunities.
Thus
, it would be advantageous in various ways.
On the other hand
, learning
other
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 language have
few
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 drawbacks. The primary con of
this
 approach is that it would not be advantageous to
student
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students
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those
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who
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 are not
wiling
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 to move to other nations.
For example
, if a child chooses to learn Spanish and
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 to build his career in his own country
then
 it would be not fruitful for his career. Another major demerit point is that
,
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decision making
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 skills of students
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 primary
school
 is less as compared to secondary
school
 children.
Thus
, rather than wasting time at primary
school
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,school
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 they may choose their field of interest at
secondary
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 level. To conclude, there are merits and
demerit
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demerits
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 of the aforementioned statement. Despite the
drawbacks
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 one can say that
merits
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are outweigh
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 the demerits as it with be beneficial for students to settle abroad and set their career.
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