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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the development of technology and media, many
parents
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 allow
children
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 to entertain themselves by watching TV or playing computer. But, some people say that reading
books
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 is outweigh using technology. There are my opinions about
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 discussion below.
To begin
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 with, reading
books
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 can build
children
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's creativity and improve their concentration. Recent research shows that
children
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 who read story
books
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 would pay attention to class longer than others when they grow older to go to school.
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,
parents
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 can gain more opportunities to spend time accompanying their
children
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.
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,
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 can read stories while they play the characters in the story, and interact with
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. Meanwhile,
parents
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 can observe the child's health, especially in the mental aspect, and
then
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 talk to and help them in time. Obviously, information from TV is easier and more quickly to be accessed by kids.
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, when
children
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 see the documentary -- Wild Life, they can recognize the animals and gain knowledge of those animals in an intuitive way.
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, playing video games can build their practical ability.
Such
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 as, playing the
first
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-person game can improve the
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's ability on keeping balance and a sense of direction. But, regardless of whether watching TV or playing electric games are both probable to make
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 addicted to them.
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,
parents
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 should supervise the kids not to spend too much time on those technologies. In conclusion,
nevertheless
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 obtaining information by reading
books
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 is slower than using high-tech devices, it is not only for gaining knowledge but
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 for building family bonds and creating a chance to
parents
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 to pay attention to their
children
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.
However
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, in recent years, technology is providing an important function in our life. So,
parents
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also
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 should allow their
children
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 to use those techniques under their supervision.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imagination
  • creativity
  • visualize
  • deeper understanding
  • language comprehension
  • critical thinking
  • empathy
  • perspectives
  • emotional benefits
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • cognitive development
  • educational programs
  • interactive
  • stimulate
  • relaxation
  • reduce stress
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