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Scientific innovation is always a positive thing and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your answer.

#innovation #support
For some, the developments of science
is
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 always bringing good
beneficial
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benefits
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 for human and
it
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 should be boosted in many ways. In my point of view, scientific
innovation
 probably brings a benefit for human
lifes
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life
lives
 and a drawback. On the one hand, the most compelling reason for holding to my view is that
innovation
 is essential to develop continually because scientific
innovation
 has to search and learn more to find new ideas or new inventions. To get
prosperity
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of
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 human
lifes
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lives
life
,
scientist
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scientists
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 are more creative since they faced many problems and solve
it
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.
For example
, the invention of advanced technology
such
 as smartphones and laptops. In the
past
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 people were difficult to communicate in
far
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way
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ways
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, yet they can send
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 message by letter and it took more time
in
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several days or weeks.
However
, because of scientific discoveries,
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member of society can keep
contact
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 with their relatives, families, or friends
just
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for just
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 a few
second
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 by helping
smartphone
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. So
that
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, scientific advances are very useful for human
lifes
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life
lives
.
On the other hand
, not at all scientific
innovation
 should be encouraged since the invention may be harmful
for
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surroundings
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. It is
the
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 vital
believe
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 that scientific advances have to
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reviewed
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. An example of
this
 is the virus of zombie/covid-19 that
scientist
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scientists
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 found in the laboratory.
This
discoverie
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discovery
discoveries
 will be better not
use
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 in
humans
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 life because there will bring many drawbacks.
Therefore
, if
scientist
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scientists
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 found new discoveries, it would be better not directly
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in
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the
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society or directly tested in the surroundings. To conclude, scientific
innovation
 is essential to develop to find well-being for humans.
However
, the discovery of scientific
innovation
 is not all to use because it may be dangerous for individuals or environments.
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