You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake explain where you think the waste has come from suggest what the council should do about the problem

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to concern

for

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you that water pollution in

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Gregory

Lake

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which is located

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the

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Colombo City.

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, during the past month the council have been cleaning that

lake

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and the overlook around the

lake

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so clean.

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, sometimes many people like to catch fish in the evening and some young children played around near the

lake

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, we are notified nowadays

nobody

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has

done

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cleaning

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the

lake

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and see many wastes

float

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on the water

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because our community people discover that one company often

to throw

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much

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garbage

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into

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the

lake

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, our community people often complain regarding

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issue to the company owner and do not take any action against the staff who throw the garbage in the

lake

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, we would like to suggest you that fix CCTV cameras around the

lake

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and take legal action against that company. I hope you will concern about

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matter as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Sam.

asankabiz84Tue Jan 03 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

166 words

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