You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake explain where you think the waste has come from suggest what the council should do about the problem

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to concern

for

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you that water pollution in

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Gregory

Lake

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which is located

to

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in

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the

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Colombo City.

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, during the past month the council have been cleaning that

lake

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and the overlook around the

lake

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so clean.

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, sometimes many people like to catch fish in the evening and some young children played around near the

lake

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.

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, we are notified nowadays

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has

done

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cleaning

at

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the

lake

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and see many wastes

float

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on the water

,

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because our community people discover that one company often

to throw

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much

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garbage

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the

lake

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.

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, our community people often complain regarding

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issue to the company owner and do not take any action against the staff who throw the garbage in the

lake

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.

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, we would like to suggest you that fix CCTV cameras around the

lake

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and take legal action against that company. I hope you will concern about

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matter as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Sam.