You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake explain where you think the waste has come from suggest what the council should do about the problem

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to concern
for
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you that water pollution in
a
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Gregory
Lake
which is located
to
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the
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Colombo City.
Firstly
, during the past month the council have been cleaning that
lake
and the overlook around the
lake
so clean.
Therefore
, sometimes many people like to catch fish in the evening and some young children played around near the
lake
.
However
, we are notified nowadays
nobody
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has
done
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cleaning
at
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the
lake
and see many wastes
float
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on the water
,
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because our community people discover that one company often
to throw
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much
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garbage
to
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the
lake
.
Moreover
, our community people often complain regarding
this
issue to the company owner and do not take any action against the staff who throw the garbage in the
lake
.
Finally
, we would like to suggest you that fix CCTV cameras around the
lake
and take legal action against that company. I hope you will concern about
this
matter as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Sam.
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