WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that the government should have a large budget for constructing new railway systems for very fast
trains
between cities
, while
others say that the fund should be spent on developing public transportation
. While
constructing railway lines for speedy trains
is essential to reduce car accidents
, l believe that improving public transport is essential to reduce air
pollution
in cities
.
On the one hand, building new developments and quick trains
provide safety for people
who travel regularly. Recently, the number of car accidents
increased significantly due to
the dangerous roads and undeveloped infrastructure of highways between cities
, thus
if an accident occurs, there will be no one able to help those people
because they are outside cities
, where there are not enough possibilities to help. Having said that constructing lines for very fast trains
encourages people
to use them because it is faster and safer. For example
, in 2018, Saudi Arabia had the highest number of accidents
that occurred between cities
, it is considered 80% of cars due to
bad roads and weather conditions. However
, I think that there are several solutions to address this
problem such
as improving roads rather than spending a huge money to build lines for development trains
.
On the other hand
, improving public transportation
is a better way to reduce air
pollution
in the big cities
because these improvements will encourage people
to use public buses or trains
rather than their cars in order to avoid traffic which will decrease carbon emissions in cities
. Large cities
now suffer from air
pollution
which causes some breathing problems, liver cancer and even a big problem with climate change as well, thus
using public transportation
is a viable solution to this
problem. For instance
, the Japanese government in the last
decade has developed and improved all public transport in order to avoid this
issue which is now Tokyo the only unpolluted city in the world, although
it has population density. However
, from my point of view, focusing on public transport is extremely important now than anything to reduce the carbon footprint in the big cities
.
In conclusion, although
building new railways for very fast trains
is important to avoid tragic accidents
. However
, I believe that spending money on improving public transportation
is extremely crucial for reducing serious air
pollution
in cities
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