In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that the government should have a large budget for constructing new railway systems for very fast
trains
between Use synonyms
cities
, Use synonyms
while
others say that the fund should be spent on developing public Linking Words
transportation
. Use synonyms
While
constructing railway lines for speedy Linking Words
trains
is essential to reduce car Use synonyms
accidents
, l believe that improving public transport is essential to reduce Use synonyms
air
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pollution
in Use synonyms
cities
.
On the one hand, building new developments and quick Use synonyms
trains
provide safety for Use synonyms
people
who travel regularly. Recently, the number of car Use synonyms
accidents
increased significantly Use synonyms
due to
the dangerous roads and undeveloped infrastructure of highways between Linking Words
cities
, Use synonyms
thus
if an accident occurs, there will be no one able to help those Linking Words
people
because they are outside Use synonyms
cities
, where there are not enough possibilities to help. Having said that constructing lines for very fast Use synonyms
trains
encourages Use synonyms
people
to use them because it is faster and safer. Use synonyms
For example
, in 2018, Saudi Arabia had the highest number of Linking Words
accidents
that occurred between Use synonyms
cities
, it is considered 80% of cars Use synonyms
due to
bad roads and weather conditions. Linking Words
However
, I think that there are several solutions to address Linking Words
this
problem Linking Words
such
as improving roads rather than spending a huge money to build lines for development Linking Words
trains
.
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On the other hand
, improving public Linking Words
transportation
is a better way to reduce Use synonyms
air
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pollution
in the big Use synonyms
cities
because these improvements will encourage Use synonyms
people
to use public buses or Use synonyms
trains
rather than their cars in order to avoid traffic which will decrease carbon emissions in Use synonyms
cities
. Large Use synonyms
cities
now suffer from Use synonyms
air
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pollution
which causes some breathing problems, liver cancer and even a big problem with climate change as well, Use synonyms
thus
using public Linking Words
transportation
is a viable solution to Use synonyms
this
problem. Linking Words
For instance
, the Japanese government in the Linking Words
last
decade has developed and improved all public transport in order to avoid Linking Words
this
issue which is now Tokyo the only unpolluted city in the world, Linking Words
although
it has population density. Linking Words
However
, from my point of view, focusing on public transport is extremely important now than anything to reduce the carbon footprint in the big Linking Words
cities
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
building new railways for very fast Linking Words
trains
is important to avoid tragic Use synonyms
accidents
. Use synonyms
However
, I believe that spending money on improving public Linking Words
transportation
is extremely crucial for reducing serious Use synonyms
air
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pollution
in Use synonyms
cities
.Use synonyms
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