Machines have replaced physical work in many industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the upheaval of technology and innovation, an increasing number of hi-tech products
such
as robots and advanced Linking Words
machines
emerge in our life and even have replaced human beings in various industries Use synonyms
such
as the construction industry and agriculture. Though it is admitted that the phenomenon may result in some problems including unemployment, I still believe that comparatively speaking, there are more benefits than drawbacks.
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To begin
with, the expansion of advanced Linking Words
machines
facilitates efficiency and improves productivity. To be specific, Use synonyms
machines
will never feel tired and have no need to relax as long as the programming has been accurately designed, Use synonyms
also
not shouldering the responsibility to take care of the family member. Linking Words
As a result
, Linking Words
machines
can Use synonyms
work
non-stop for hours or even for days, which promotes the efficiency of Use synonyms
production
or packaging. Use synonyms
Moreover
, certain industries, Linking Words
such
as agriculture, require big mechanics and advanced technology to Linking Words
plow
and irrigate. While people have to spend weeks completing those tasks, the Change the spelling
plough
machines
can make it within hours, which provides possibilities for mass Use synonyms
production
and improves productivity.
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Furthermore
, the fact that large-scale Linking Words
production
and application of Use synonyms
machines
in different industries lower costs indicates that it has brought great benefits to companies and our personal life as well. As Use synonyms
labor
costs have nearly doubled or even tripled in the past decades, replacing physical Change the spelling
labour
work
with Use synonyms
machines
can decrease the company's costs in designing, Use synonyms
production
, promotion, and marketing. Use synonyms
Consequently
, not only companies may make more profits, but Linking Words
such
acts will cut products’ prices and benefit customers in return. An example to illustrate that would be the express delivery industry, where self-driving cars which are able to sense their environment and operate without human involvement have been playing an increasingly important role in transporting goods in some counties,
It is tempting to believe that substituting human beings causes unemployment and poses extra burdens to individual lives, especially for lower-class people. Citizens who lack education and essential skills have no choice but to do physical Linking Words
work
to make a living. If jobs Use synonyms
such
as trunk driver, cleaner, and building words disappeared, they would fail to survive. Linking Words
However
, I believe that there are solutions to the problem, given that governments and communities can provide training for people who are in disadvantaged positions and help them to find new jobs after acquiring practical skills.
In conclusion, I hold the opinion that the advantages of replacing physical Linking Words
work
with technology outweigh the disadvantages, as far as efficiency and economic benefits are concerned.Use synonyms
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