Some people say that remote work is benficial while others say it has disdvantages. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Companies started 100% remote work during

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pandemic. After the pandemic, most

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companies remained completely remote, while some of the companies

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to their employees

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they can either work remotely or can come to the office regularly. According to me, working remotely has some advantages as well as some disadvantages. I will

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remote work at the end of my essay.

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Jan 3, 2023

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

70 words

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Some people say that remote work is benficial while others say it has disdvantages. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some argue that at school should prioritize life skills, such as working in teams and solving problems instead of traditional academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing videogames. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

does being famous are more advantages or more disadvantages

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