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Some people believe that activities of large multinational companies mostly benefit the economies of developing countries, other people take the opposite view and feel these large multinationals are harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The
world
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 has been becoming a global place for the
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 five decades.
This
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 situation brings several new concepts with it
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 as multinational institutions, multinational organizations, and so on. Some groups of
people
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 think that cosmopolitan
companies
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 are mainly good for the economical status of growing
countries
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,
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, a number of
people
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 do not agree with
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 idea. In
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 essay, I am going to talk about both sides of view and explain my view of opinion.
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, thanks to rapid and solid developments in technology and transportation, the
world
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 has become a well-connected place. While the link between
countries
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 is enlarging,
companies
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 seeking ways that they can make profits from other nations, especially, the
countries
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 that are developing.
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, the organization called Coca-cola has plenty of establishments in the entire
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,
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 company supports and increases the economy of
countries
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 for gaining money.
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 is basically a win-win case for both the company and the country.
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, multinational
companies
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 are beneficial for developing
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countries
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countries'
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 economies,
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 there are some opposing ideas. The
people
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 are complaining about cosmopolitan
companies
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' existence because of their nationalist ideas. But, it should be emphasized that it is not possible in the contemporary
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. To illustrate, one of the most significant developing
countries
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,Turkey ,started to grow at the beginning of the 2000s with multinational
companies
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 helps
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 as Coca-Cola, Vodafone, Qatar Airlines and so on. If Turkey sought a way that named a closed economy, Turkey would not be grown as much as it now.
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, these are why multinational
companies
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 are advantageous for growing nations. In conclusion,
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 some
people
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 say that multinational
companies
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 have disadvantages and are harmful to the developing country's economy, I totally support the opposite idea because of the benefits of those establishments that I mentioned above.

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