Scientific innovation is always a positive thing and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your answer.

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to promote scientific innovations.
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some scientific
innovation
leads to
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situation
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,
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should still be promoted, as
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advantages drive
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human development. On one hand,
innovation
in science is vital to enhance
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life. Scientific discoveries have benefited people from simple saving-labour
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,
such
as
microwave
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, to
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great
accomplishment
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, like
moon
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landing. If,
for example
,
scientists
had not done more innovations in space research,
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a human
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human
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might never have set foot on the moon, and people may have no microwave in their kitchen today
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since microwave was developed from the so-called unimportant discovery when
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scientists
built a space rocket. From these cases, it is vivid that scientific
innovation
is crucial for mankind. Aside from the advantages,
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invention could lead to a negative situation, if there was no moral ethics to
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how mankind
use
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it. Atomic
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in
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World War II and poisonous gas in
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examples of how a brilliant breakthrough in science could lead to a
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. One can argue that it is
the
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human who
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whether to amplify the positive or negative side of the invention.
However
, if
this
situation continues, a similar nightmare will likely
to
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occur in the future.
Therefore
,
scientists
and countries have to agree on rules to regulate how these technologies use. To sum up, mankind has benefited from scientific
innovation
to improve their living conditions and accomplish wonders,
therefore
, it should still be encouraged.
However
, some innovations were transformed into killing
machine
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.
Thus
,
scientists
and countries will have to generate a set of rules if no one
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to intensify the negative side of scientific inventions.
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