Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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universities there should be equal proportions of both men and women in each subject. In my opinion, I do not agree with

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statement and will explain the reasons below.

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with, if universities start to admit an equal number of both genders in each subject

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it will be difficult for the universities to fill all seats as some courses are more popular in one gender and some are in another.

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, girls will be more interested in taking nursing courses while boys will be more interested in courses related to gaming.

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, the major drawback of setting the proportion for each gender is to ruin the merit. People who are more capable will not be able to get the course which they want because of less number of seats.

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ruin the competition.

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, a mediocre boy will be competing against a highly intelligent girl in a nursing course. To conclude, women should have equal rights and opportunities but to set an equal proportion is not right because it will ruin the competition and merit.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is the government's responsibility to provide financial support to old people after they retire or individuals should save money for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world?

Nowadays some countries encourage people to buy more and more products, which is good for economy. While others believe it is bad for the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you