Online education is vecoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace fave-to- face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Along with the development of technologies in our modern life, there are
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changes in
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. The development of online
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is creating great opportunities for many
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. But others prefer face-to-face learning. in
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I will discuss both ideas and give my opinion. On the one hand, I think online
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is very convenient.
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can learn whenever and wherever they want. It
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saves time and property.
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,
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can participate in various training courses and increase their knowledge base.
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, many
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want to attend courses at Oxford University. Many
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have achieved
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thanks to online courses.
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,
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, it cannot be denied that face-to-face teaching has an indispensable role in
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, the advantages of traditional teaching are that
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can ask questions about things they don't understand or know, and they can ask their teacher for help
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in correcting
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the student will be more interested in studying.
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,
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can establish new relationships with others and strengthen their knowledge by exchanging ideas with others. To sum up, there are no downsides to either. I think that neither online
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nor face-to-face
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should be rejected. To achieve a high level
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, it needs to be supported and at the same time
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