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While some people think that the problem with education in poor countries is the teaching methodology used , others believe it is the lack of resources that is the roal issues. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #education #countries #methodology #lack #resources
Nowadays,it has often been argued by some people that the primary issue associated with
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 the methods of teaching, whereas some argue that
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 of teaching resources is the main reason.In my opinion , I will discuss both of them
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the
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developing
countries
. On the one hand, some individuals argue that the teaching method is responsible for the teaching distribution in undeveloped land because universities are still focusing on the conventional style mostly relays on theory rather than practical
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internships
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, which imparts a real-life experience to a student,if a pupil could not get enough practical knowledge, it would be hard for him or her to achieve their future goals and it will not be possible by reading only.
For example
, In India,departments are mostly theoretical teaching as compared to practical
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 to learn and prepare
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of them.
On the other hand
, some argue that
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 of resources in poor
countries
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 the main cause
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this
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, computers, the internet and
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 teachers.
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Furthermore
,it is
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 crucial part of
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 well.
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,
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computer knowledge is important for research in
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online sources for study in today's era , and it is
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needed
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Secondly
,there are some
countries
 which do not have sufficient internet access for everyone.
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,In Africa, there are some village schools,where they
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 have computers and teachers for primary faculty as well as some villages,
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 do not have internet connections. In
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conclusion
,
therefore
,the methodology is responsible for the problem.
Nevertheless
,resources are
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 these two issues need to
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address
 to mitigate the present solution in emerging
countries
.
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