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Experts believe that over the next decade, robots will be doing many of the jobs currently done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Nowadays, technology has taken place of many
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 for humans. In the
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 almost will take a charge of the population's
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.
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 always reduce the workload of workers whereas in certain areas it might be not possible to completely rely on them. There are some pros and cons of working with
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. To commence with,
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 are mainly used in the automobile industry,
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 are useful in stereotypical
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human interruption. It is a time-saving machine and works with accuracy because they work on repetitive tasks and they are programmed for that so that they work effectively and efficiently.
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, It makes humans free and makes them available to do some extra important tasks where human involvement must be required. In ,fact after the robotic machines nation is always trying to upgrade them so they increase their area of work and capability. In Germany, they are doing research and development on making a robot that helps Doctors in the operating room.
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, Sometimes relying on
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 might be harmful. the crowd are going to be more and more dependent on
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result it increases unemployment. In society people buy
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 for their office or factory use
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 will reduce the effort of labours and take
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 and it will directly impact our society and employment.
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, Nowadays in the service sectors like the hotel industry purchase
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 for serving food, so it will take job waiters In the Conclusion,
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 are useful for us but up to a certain limit beyond, there are always required human and them thinking capabilities.

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