Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disgree.

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in every society which must have done, and who is better to do

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except students who have more free

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can be useful for them and their community at the same

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is a belief among a part of people and I fully support

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idea, so, in

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issue briefly. It is clear to everyone that youths are the backbone of all societies.

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means, it is obvious that they have to become ready for their future life as a responsible and reliable person

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because living after childhood and teenager-hood is totally different and serious,

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, it can not happen unless we let them experience some social

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and learn array range of things from it.

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can help them to learn how they have to work together.

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, painting their schools as

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volunteer work is not something that they can do individually, so, cooperating will be learnt

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them in

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way.

On the other hand

, a myriad range of children spend most of their leisure

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playing video games

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of having friends,

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, they suffer from their ability to communicate and make friends. But, when they try to start doing

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, they find a chance to make new friends and improve

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skill within themselves. On the other side of

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equation are governments and their usual financial problems, and

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is one of the things that we always witness

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their whining. If they do not need to dedicate any money

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in a country, it could help them to use that money for some more essential social services. As an example, if teenagers take part in cleaning their neighbourhood, the government would use their human source for other

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and they can

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save lots of money from wasting.

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ỉn approximately all societies which are low paid and none of the adults accepts to do them,

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, they are vital to be done.

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situation, adolescents could help their country, and in

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way, both sides would achieve advantages from it. In conclusion, it would be great if teenagers use their spare

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to help their society by doing voluntary

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, and I believe it has plenty of benefits for both sides.