You applied for a new passport, and it got delayed. Due to this delay, you missed your (study) intake. You are very disappointed over this delay. Write a letter to Regional Passport Office for the same. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe what happened and how you are at loss • s say what you wantthe officer to do

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to you regarding my disappointment in the issuance of my new

passport

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. My

passport

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number is T53555 and my

application

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number is WTE565334. I applied for my online

application

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four weeks earlier and I suppose to receive my

passport

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last

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Friday,

however

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, I did not receive it yet. I am gutted by

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service and now because of

this

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delay I am not able to join my university on time, my

last

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date has expired to join. My college sent me a letter with regard to a warning, that if, I will not be available as soon as they have the authority to decline my admission

application

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, the fees which I paid will not be refunded. Now I would like you to take some severe action to process my

passport

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application

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as soon as possible,

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, provide me with a reference letter in regards to your time taking process, so that they allow me to attend classes after receiving my

passport

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. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully. Sandeep.

Submitted by sandeeprawat2017 on Thu Jan 05 2023

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

179 words

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