You lost an item while travelling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employee. In youro letter, - Describe what you lost and how the employee helped you find it - Say how you felt after recovering it - Explain why it was important to you

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to say thanks to your company worker who helped me to find out my personal item which I lost during travel.
Last
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week , I took the public bus from Barnala to Amritsar. After, I forgot to pick up my
bag
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and left it
inside
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the bus .
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, I called
at
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public service and collected information about my
bag
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.I felt really
delightful
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when I received my
bag
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. I admired the person who found my suitcase and gave him a nice present as
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regard
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.
This
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bag
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contains many essential documents
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as credit or debit cards and my personal identification .
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, I have my qualification certificates in it ,
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this
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sac is highly valuable for me. Yours faithfully, Rahul Sharma.
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