Some people think that the best wat to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative wats or reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that the optimal way to lower
crime
is to provide Use synonyms
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them with
with
more years in Change preposition
apply
jail
, I believe that a preferable way is to educate them to lower Use synonyms
the
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apply
crime
.
On the one hand, there is to believe that Use synonyms
longer
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long
term
in prison will reduce Fix the agreement mistake
terms
crime
because some citizens thought that Use synonyms
criminals
will learn their lesson. Use synonyms
Firstly
, most of these Linking Words
people
who commit felonies are older than forty Use synonyms
years-old
, so these adults tend to commit a Correct your spelling
years old
crime
again. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there are multiple statistics that mentioned many situations in which Linking Words
those criminal
will Change the determiner
that criminal
those criminals
return
to Use synonyms
the
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apply
jail
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withing
a period of five years, Correct your spelling
within
and
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apply
this
time with a longer sentence. Linking Words
For instance
, In the United States, California, Linking Words
Prisions
are full of gangsters who violate the law, and there are no sufficient Correct your spelling
Prisons
prisions
to Correct your spelling
prisons
accomodate
all these Correct your spelling
accommodate
criminals
. Use synonyms
However
, I believe that we do not need more Linking Words
prisions
to put all these offenders because it is Correct your spelling
prisons
proved
that Correct your spelling
proven
this
method is not working.
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On the other hand
, many Linking Words
people
believe it is better to educate them while they are in Use synonyms
prision
because it is proved that educated Correct your spelling
prison
people
might not commit a Use synonyms
crime
again. Use synonyms
To begin
with, citizens who have Linking Words
higher
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a higher
level
of education raise awareness of the importance to keep away from Fix the agreement mistake
levels
jail
. Use synonyms
Also
, when they finished a high-school diploma or Linking Words
some
of them achieve higher education Correct quantifier usage
apply
such
as becoming a lawyer, they will never Linking Words
return
to Use synonyms
jail
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in the UKLinking Words
prision
system, Correct your spelling
prison
criminals
who have a sentence longer than five years, they are Use synonyms
sending
to an educational program to obtain a degree, so they can Wrong verb form
sent
return
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into
society as Change preposition
to
a
rehabilitated individuals. I believe Correct article usage
apply
this
is a preferable school of thought because these Linking Words
people
are relocated in society and they will function properly.
To conclude, even though some Use synonyms
people
believe that sending Use synonyms
criminals
to a longer period of time might lower the Use synonyms
crime
rate, it is not always the right method to follow because many of them will Use synonyms
return
to Use synonyms
jail
. Use synonyms
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However
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,However
criminals
who were educated while in Use synonyms
jail
, it is proved that they will never come again to prison.Use synonyms
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