You and your family are living in rented accommadation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with rhe condition of some of the furniture.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you doing great. I am a tenant in one of your accommodations. I am writing

this

letter to bring your attention to some of the unable furniture as a part of the rental arrangement. I am hoping that you could fix or replace them with new ones. I live in your apartment

last

four months. In the beginning,we are extremely satisfied and happy when we moved into the apartment but unfortunately,we found that some of the furniture is out of date.

For instance

, the air condition has noisy sounds and water is leaking since we have lived.

Also

, the fridge does not maintain a normal temperature and

this

is the reason why our food turned bad quickly. One more thing, the dinner table leg has broken. I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply. I think the best way to solve the problem is to replace it with a better one. Sincerely, Laylo Rustamova Rustamova Laylo

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

167 words

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