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Do you think that parents should be punished if their five-year-old child commits a crime? From what age should children be held responsible for their own behaviours?

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Change your mindset about approaching and learning a new language, I’m sure you’ll succeed. Many people say that I have a gift for learning foreign languages, but I think
this
 is that's not entirely true. I find it's not a gift, but it's a hard practice, and maybe
also
 the fact that I've put in a lot of effort over the years. You know, from the day we were born, every one of us human beings has a skill for learning languages because when you were born, we don’t even know how to talk, but we can communicate in two years. So if you can understand and communicate in your mother tongue, you can certainly do the same thing with a new language. What you need is an effective learning method, time, and motivation. That means if you’ve known the language learning method through reading books, through the sharing with successful people, you just need to study hard, have a sense of progress and have the virtue of perseverance, and surely you will be successful. Give yourself a chance to experience, and challenge your limit
instead
 of believing that you’re born with a certain level of intelligence and that it can’t be improved upon.
That is
also
 the way to help yourself be stronger and more confident. Good luck on your journey!
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