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Some people believe that engaging in an active pastime does more to develop childrens' life skills than time spent reading. To what extent do ypu agree or disagree?

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Nowadays there are different models of education. Some believe that physical activity contributes to the acquisition of
skills
 in a child, while others,
on the contrary
, pay more attention to the development of theoretical books. But despite
this
, I believe that physical activity contributes to the acquisition of
skills
, but I want to consider
this
 question from two opposite sides in
this
 essay. It should
also
 not be forgotten that books give people a certain spiritual component. On the one hand, written information in a book or other paper medium provides a theoretical part. With it, you can learn about things that you have never done or seen.The theoretical aspect helps to avoid mistakes or failures, as well as warn against danger due to awareness.
On the other hand
, mastering
skills
 is impossible without practice itself.
Therefore
, it is very important to pay attention to the development of
life
skills
 from the side of the development of physical
skills
. All the same, the theory obtained can be refuted and the application of
this
 knowledge can be individual. A person should always try
first
,
thus
 he will know about
this
 matter. And if a child repeats the same actions for a long time,
this
 will form a
life
 skill in him. In conclusion, I want to affirm that education, both spiritual and theoretical, as well as physically active, is very important and continuously connected not only in the upbringing of a child
,
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 but
also
 in
life
. But still, in order to acquire
life
skills
, it is practice and actions that are required in its commission.
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