At present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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drawing some explanations and examples Broadly speaking,involved countries may face many profits coming from youngsters'

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from juniors. Analyzing possible disadvantages,from the ancient time elder generation are highly admitted

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sectors are equally essential for a nation.But I opine that the minus sides outweigh the plus ones.As every segment of our citizens are vital for the future