Ownership of mobile phones has risen dramatically in recent years despite the potentially harmful effects they may have on our health and on society. Government should introduce measures to restrict ownership to those who need them for their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, using mobile

phones

is part of

people

's life. Everything you will do is

at

Change preposition

on

show examples

your

smart

Correct your spelling

smartphones

show examples

phones

. I agree that even they know it is hazardous to

ones

Change noun form

one's

show examples

health like exposure to

radiations

Fix the agreement mistake

radiation

show examples

and blurring of vision, and

also

it has effect

with

Change preposition

on

show examples

our society, one of these is lack of communication.

First

of all, using mobile

phones

can cause harm to our health.

For example

, exposure to

radiations

Fix the agreement mistake

radiation

show examples

. We cannot deny that

using

Change preposition

by using

show examples

our mobile

phones

, we are not free from radiation. Especially

if

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

for those

people

sleeping with

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

phones

underneath their

pillow

Fix the agreement mistake

pillows

show examples

. Some parents reported that their kids have seizure episodes of too much use of gadgets. And some

people

also

experiencing

Wrong verb form

experience

show examples

blurring of vision

because

Add the preposition

ofbecause

show examples

too much exposure to mobile

phone

Fix the agreement mistake

phones

show examples

.

Secondly

, human beings are more attached to their

smart

Correct your spelling

smartphones

show examples

phones

and did not even realize the gap they are creating with their close friends or even with their families.

For example

, at the dinner table supposed to be they will have

conversation

Add an article

a conversation

show examples

but some

people

will rather spend their time on their mobile

phones

than

talking

Wrong verb form

talk

show examples

with them personally. In my opinion, because of

widely

Replace the word

widespread

show examples

use of electronics. Most of the ownership of

smart

Correct your spelling

smartphones

show examples

phones

cannot help

not

Correct word choice

but not

show examples

to use

it

Correct pronoun usage

them

show examples

through

this

Correct determiner usage

these

show examples

gadgets they can do their job or

promoting

Wrong verb form

promote

show examples

and

selling

Wrong verb form

sell

show examples

their product remotely. Even they are aware of possible health and

society

Replace the word

societal

show examples

effect

with

Change preposition

on

show examples

them.