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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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Is thought by some
people
 that English, which is now the most widely spoken
language
 in the world, may
one
 day take over all other languages and
result
 in their eventual disappearance. Having
one
language
 would certainly have the benefits of better understanding of each other and it
also
 has some drawbacks.
One
 benefit of having a global
language
 will promote communication between different
nations
 as well as individuals.
People
 will be able to communicate easily with other
people
. Trade between
nations
 will become easy which will
result
 in economic growth worldwide. Having
one
 universal
language
 will remove the need to learn a new
language
.
Furthermore
, there will be no
language
 barrier and
people
 will not feel restricted to travel to other
nations
. Globally, the
nations
 will be closer than before and will contribute to each other economy. On the other side, it will lead to the extinction of other languages which will
result
 in the loss of culture and rich heritage. Our society is made up of multi-cultures and diversity, and diversity has its own beauty.
However
, the loss of culture will
result
 in a loss of interest to travel to different parts of the world to learn about new cultures. Tourism depended countries will be affected the most by
this
 because their economy is based on the tourist industry. In conclusion, while there are plus points to having
one
 global
language
, too much would be lost
as a
result
. Maintaining local languages and cultures should be prioritized to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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