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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.

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With the
further
 development of the
car
 industry and artificial intelligence,
car
-making companies make more budget to develop a
driverless
car
. Some
people
 say that the vehicles on the road including individual cars and public ones will be
driverless
. Many
people
 are concerned about the risk of
driverless
 cars, but I think the profits outweigh the drawbacks. Nowadays, in some developed countries,
driverless
 cars are starting to be allowed to drive on the road. And it shows that the system can lead the
car
 to arrive at the destination in a safe and comfortable way. So if the
driverless
car
 will widespread use by
people
 in the future, they can provide a sense of safety and comfortable travel for us.
For example
, in driving time,
people
 can do a lot of things,
such
 as working, reading, watching movies and even sleeping for rest. And we do not need to worry about watching the road in front of us every moment.
In particular
, the
driverless
car
 will be very friendly for
people
 who need to take a long-distance trip that may feel tired during the travel, which enhances the risk of occurring a traffic accident. In the same condition, the system of the
driverless
car
 can predict and estimate the extent of risk and make an accurate decision when danger comes over.
On the other hand
, if criminal hackers attract the system of the
driverless
car
, it will cause a traffic accident in a short time so the driver has no reflection to control the
car
.
However
,
this
 problem can be solved by the programmer of
car
-making companies. Because, if the
car
 is decided to be launched on the market, it must be well prepared to resist the risks. In conclusion, technology should serve and provide convenience for humans, so once the problems of the
driverless
car
 are solved, the era of the
driverless
car
 will advent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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