You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student of certificate III in your college, Currently, I stay at
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no 43. I am writing to you to letting you know about my
hostel
.
Firstly
, as you know we need to share the
hostel
for 4 people.
However
, it is quite difficult for us because we are in the same courses. At some point, we need to get ready for class at the same time, and sometimes it makes a
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situation. It is not really good for a long-time relationship housemates.
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, when it comes when I need to rest and sleep, some of them still study and make noise, so I cannot get enough rest and sleep. I would like to change the
hostel
with different course students, and I believe it
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best way for me and if the
hostel
has a choice to stay with 2 people in a room, I prefer to have it. I hope you will consider my request and make a faster arrangement for me before my new semester begins. Thank you in advance and I await your prompt response. I expect to hear from you soon. Sincerely, Lynda
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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