The best way to make roads safer is to make drivers take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is common knowledge that before getting

driving

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license,

people

's driving skills are tested and it is claimed that in order to keep

roads

safe

this

exam should be held every

year

.

Although

people

will be able to relearn knowledge they forgot , I disapprove of

this

opinion since the major cause of accidents

in

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the road resulted from congestion , the poor quality of

roads

and some road security rule brokers. To commence with , it is irrefutable that some

people

are absent-minded when it comes to learning academic subjects and much more.

Thus

, driving rules and laws they have learnt can quickly get out

from

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their mind during the

year

. Some

people

even could cease to consider those laws and knowledge not

indespensible

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indispensable

anymore. They suddenly lose their importance and driver may

broke

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them even intentionally

especially

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adults who are mostly irresponsible

of

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their actions.

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,

the

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social unrest can occur in the streets and some

people

's health

also

can be threatened

However

, it is evident that bottlenecks

as a result

of heavy

traffic

congestions

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and

pedestrians

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unappropriate

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inappropriate

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movements in the streets are common reasons

of

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car crashes

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especially in the hub of the cities. The rapid burgeon of the vehicles in the towns

lead

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to heavy

traffic

congestions

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congestion

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creating existential threats

for

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humanity's life and the

environmental

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. So ,

roads

are becoming overcrowded and unsafe for

people

to cross out them even though

traffic

lights are working

24hours

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24 hours

each day without shutting down.

Besides

,not only cars are the prime reason

of

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this

pressing matter but

also

, many

pedestrians

aren't rule-abiding .

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, it is attested that

the

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last

year

more than

a

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half of accidents

were

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occured

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occurred

by the severe actions of

pedestrians

and

this

costed

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their children's life . Because more children than adults were victims of those actions To sum up , submitting driving tests every

year

is

the

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great way of enhancing driving abilities and restoring

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information about it . But I disagree with

this

view due to

traffic

congestion and irresponsible

pedestrians

who are responsible

of

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car accidents making

roads

unsafe .