The best way to make roads safer is to make drivers take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is common knowledge that before getting especially in the hub of the cities. The rapid burgeon of the vehicles in the towns
driving
license, Add an article
a driving
people
's driving skills are tested and it is claimed that in order to keep Use synonyms
roads
safe Use synonyms
this
exam should be held every Linking Words
year
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Although
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people
will be able to relearn knowledge they forgot , I disapprove of Use synonyms
this
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in
the road resulted from congestion , the poor quality of Change preposition
on
roads
and some road security rule brokers.
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people
are absent-minded when it comes to learning academic subjects and much more. Use synonyms
Thus
, driving rules and laws they have learnt can quickly get out Linking Words
from
their mind during the Change preposition
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year
. Some Use synonyms
people
even could cease to consider those laws and knowledge not Use synonyms
indespensible
anymore. They suddenly lose their importance and driver may Correct your spelling
indispensable
broke
them even intentionally Change the verb form
break
especially
adults who are mostly irresponsible Add the comma(s)
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the
social unrest can occur in the streets and some Correct article usage
apply
people
's health Use synonyms
also
can be threatened
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as a result
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congestions
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congestion
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pedestrians
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pedestrians'
pedestrian's
unappropriate
movements in the streets are common reasons Correct your spelling
inappropriate
of
car crashesChange preposition
for
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,
lead
to heavy Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
traffic
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congestions
creating existential threats Fix the agreement mistake
congestion
for
humanity's life and the Change preposition
to
environmental
. So , Replace the word
environment
roads
are becoming overcrowded and unsafe for Use synonyms
people
to cross out them even though Use synonyms
traffic
lights are working Use synonyms
24hours
each day without shutting down. Correct your spelling
24 hours
Besides
,not only cars are the prime reason Linking Words
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this
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also
, many Linking Words
pedestrians
aren't rule-abiding . Use synonyms
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, it is attested that Linking Words
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in the
last
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more than Use synonyms
a
half of accidents Correct article usage
apply
were
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occured
by the severe actions of Correct your spelling
occurred
pedestrians
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this
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costed
their children's life . Because more children than adults were victims of those actions
To sum up , submitting driving tests every Wrong verb form
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year
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the
great way of enhancing driving abilities and restoring Change the article
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the
information about it . But I disagree with Correct article usage
apply
this
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traffic
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pedestrians
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car accidents making Change the preposition
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roads
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