Many people argue that smoking should be banned due to its harmful effects on human health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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contemporary era, a host of individuals think that smoking should be prohibited due to its unpleasant outcome on human health. I partially agree with the given statement. To commence with, cigarettes are made

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tobacco

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and nicotine,

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Nevertheless

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the consequences of

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consumption on human health have reached an alarming level. To exemplify, smoking is quite common in

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present world when the smoker inhales cigarette

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and releases it from the mouth.

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, when random

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walk around it is inferior for those

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as well because a plethora of

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burn

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in public places it has more unpleasant consequences if these inhabitants

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never

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. It has more atrocious for non-smokers.

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, according to Oxford university, more non-smoker natives suffered from disagreeable diseases because sometimes they randomly inhaled

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smoke

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,

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non-smoker bodies cannot digest

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smoke

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.

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, the administration must be outlawed

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. Shifting towards the final view, the fact cannot be denied that, it is impossible to restrict in

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present world. The

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and nicotine industry has very deep roots in

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world. To illustrate it, more than two-fifths of individuals worked in

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factory as a worker ,especially Indians.

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, when the authorities restrict

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a large number of the population becomes unemployed and lost their current Job.

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, when

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people

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lost their work. They are tried to do crimes

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, drug abuse and many other kinds of commodities. All aforementioned facts and figures lead to the outcome that

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when the government banned

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more and more

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become unemployed. To conclude, unquestionably,

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totally agree with

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statement because the government needs to outlaw

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. Smoking is ruining many

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's life.