Many people argue that smoking should be banned due to its harmful effects on human health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In

this

contemporary era, a host of individuals think that smoking should be prohibited due to its unpleasant outcome on human health. I partially agree with the given statement. To commence with, cigarettes are made

by

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tobacco

and nicotine,

Nevertheless

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the consequences of

tobacco

consumption on human health have reached an alarming level. To exemplify, smoking is quite common in

this

present world when the smoker inhales cigarette

smoke

and releases it from the mouth.

Thus

, when random

people

walk around it is inferior for those

people

as well because a plethora of

people

burn

smoke

in public places it has more unpleasant consequences if these inhabitants

who

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never

smoke

. It has more atrocious for non-smokers.

For instance

, according to Oxford university, more non-smoker natives suffered from disagreeable diseases because sometimes they randomly inhaled

tobacco

smoke

,

thus

non-smoker bodies cannot digest

this

smoke

.

As a result

, the administration must be outlawed

this

. Shifting towards the final view, the fact cannot be denied that, it is impossible to restrict in

this

present world. The

tobacco

and nicotine industry has very deep roots in

this

world. To illustrate it, more than two-fifths of individuals worked in

this

factory as a worker ,especially Indians.

On the other hand

, when the authorities restrict

this

a large number of the population becomes unemployed and lost their current Job.

Furthermore

, when

the

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people

lost their work. They are tried to do crimes

such

as

pickpocket

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, drug abuse and many other kinds of commodities. All aforementioned facts and figures lead to the outcome that

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when the government banned

this

more and more

people

become unemployed. To conclude, unquestionably,

i

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totally agree with

this

statement because the government needs to outlaw

this

. Smoking is ruining many

people

's life.