"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."
Hello dear friend,
I hope you are doing great. I have a lot of news to tell you. I am very happy to say that
i
took Change the capitalization
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7.5
band score Correct article usage
a 7.5
from
IELTS. After that, many companies offer me suitable jobs. As you know my Change preposition
on
last
profission
was boring asCorrect your spelling
profession
i
had to work all day without any break and relaxing. So Change the capitalization
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i
decided to change it. And Change the capitalization
I
also
my parents did not allow to
work Correct pronoun usage
me to
in
here. Because, as they said, that job gave me Change preposition
apply
streesfull
time during Correct your spelling
stressful
a
day. Anyway, now Correct article usage
the
i
have a good occupation that can provide me Change the capitalization
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all
Add the preposition
with all
opportunits
like relaxing time. I have Correct your spelling
opportunities
great
mood during Correct article usage
a great
a
work. Because we can make conversation while working. And one advantage of my new job Remove the article
apply
that is
i
make a lot of Change the capitalization
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freind
who Correct your spelling
friends
are
so lovely and kind. If you have free time, Change the verb form
is
i
wish Change the capitalization
I
recommend
you to come here. BecauseAdd the particle
to recommend
,
there are many vacancies here.
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apply
Correct the word
Yours
Your
sincerely
Rustamova Laylo
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Yours
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.