In a response to the perceived threat of terrorism, security measures in many of the world’s major cities have been increased significantly in recent years. Do the benefits of having increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

For many years until now, People and
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tend to argue about insecurity all over the world.
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, some
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individual
individuals
trust the
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government
is their decision
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other
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believe it is
to
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much. In
this
essay, we are going to describe the benefits and the drawbacks of
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measures taken by the world's major cities.
First
of all, you can agree that
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politicians
prioritize
security
for
everbody
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everybody
in every country. For
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example
in France, after two
terrorism
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attacks in Paris
then
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in Nice, the Army was implanted everywhere
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apply
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especialy
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especially
in
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the airport
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airport
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and around public monuments. People are
feelling
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feeling
safer
since
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the growing number of
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a policeman
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policeman
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.
Therefore
, public events like
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market
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chut
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shut
down but nobody was hurt.
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the
others
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hand,
security
have
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been for the
last
years increased in so many ways that other people believe that it is
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stressful
to be
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surrounded
by the Army. For
intance
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instance
, I remember a TV documentary talking about insecure youngsters because they saw guns too frequently.
This
measure was to protect,
nevertheless
, children
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impacted badly by
this
situation. About public events like
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Christmas
market, lots of parents disagree with
this
decision because they
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thinking of the benefits to spend time with others. To
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, I would like to share that the
security
of the Nation is not
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easy
essay
,
also
decisions
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to
be make
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even if the danger is
unknow
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. In my opinion, measures
are always take
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to
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late and we have to face
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the sad
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situation
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with
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death
and casualties. Maybe is time to face reality.
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