Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their students, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?
School is the
second
place of a child. They learn various crucial things like (manners, how to behave and respect others etcetera) which improve their personality and help them to become a good human beings
. Some institutes are very strict towards their Correct the article-noun agreement
a good human being
good human beings
dressing
code which Replace the word
dress
students
has
been provided by Change the verb form
have
principles
and directors while others are not.
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principals
Firstly
, if students
are in their proper dressing
code that creates Replace the word
dress
the
environment which motivates them to gain knowledge of their practical and Correct article usage
an
therotical
work. Correct your spelling
theoretical
This
condition makes them realize that their main purpose is get
study. Change the verb form
to get
getting
Secondly
, their proper dress-code
Correct your spelling
dress code
represnts
their school and personality in front of everybody. Correct your spelling
represents
In addition
, if students
has
been provided Change the verb form
have
same
type of clothes that makes their Change the article
the same
center
of learning Change the spelling
centre
unbaised
. Correct your spelling
unbiased
For example
, it decreases rate
of bullying that happens in schools due to Add an article
the rate
different
Change the article
a different
kind
of family Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
background
and Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
class
.
Moving Fix the agreement mistake
classes
further
, wearing school uniform sometimes limit learners self expression
. As an example, Add a hyphen
self-expression
by
wearing their own choice of clothes shows their Change preposition
apply
mind
approach that how they actually want to present themselves in front of others. Change noun form
mind's
Moreover
, it also
depends on the
their Remove the article
apply
parents
financial situation Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
that
they are able to buy uniforms Correct word choice
whether
to
their children or not. Apart from Change preposition
for
this
, if students
do not wear proper uniforms then
punishment has been given by their mentors which inresult
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result
in result
violation
.
In conclusion, it should not be a matter of Change preposition
of violation
uniform
in fact the main focus should be given to the style of education that how they are working on their study. They should be provided Replace the word
uniformity
by
new opportunities in schools by motivating them in sports and other skilled activities.Change preposition
with
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- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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