Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their students, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

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School is the
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place of a child. They learn various crucial things like (manners, how to behave and respect others etcetera) which improve their personality and help them to become
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. Some institutes are very strict towards their
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code which
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been provided by
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and directors while others are not.
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, if
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are in their proper
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code that creates
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environment which motivates them to gain knowledge of their practical and
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condition makes them realize that their main purpose is
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study.
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, their proper
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represnts
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represents
their school and personality in front of everybody.
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, if
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been provided
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type of clothes that makes their
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of learning
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unbiased
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, it decreases
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of bullying that happens in schools due to
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of family
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and
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. Moving
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, wearing school uniform sometimes limit learners
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. As an example,
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wearing their own choice of clothes shows their
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approach that how they actually want to present themselves in front of others.
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, it
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depends on
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their
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financial situation
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they are able to buy uniforms
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their children or not. Apart from
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, if
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do not wear proper uniforms
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punishment has been given by their mentors which
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result
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. In conclusion, it should not be a matter of
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in fact the main focus should be given to the style of education that how they are working on their study. They should be provided
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new opportunities in schools by motivating them in sports and other skilled activities.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • equality
  • identity
  • belonging
  • pride
  • expression
  • formal dress
  • school spirit
  • social pressure
  • distracted
  • economical
  • diverse wardrobe
  • discipline
  • prepares
  • uncomfortable
  • individuality
  • expense
  • specified
  • rebellious
  • vendors
  • discomfort
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