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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 254 words.

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University
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education
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 for individuals is a crucial part of their life to get a white-collar job in the competitive world. So many
people
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 hold the view that
government
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 should spend money on student
education
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 at universities.
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, I partially agree with the statement and the following essay will elaborate on the answer with examples.
Education
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 has a pivotal role for each and every child,
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 there are two different
education
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 patterns around the world.
First
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,
university
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 studies where
people
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 can afford and who cannot afford it.
Besides
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, in many countries, governments offer a free
education
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 system for poor
people
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 who cannot afford to enter luxury colleges. When the authorities pay the
university
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 fees and other substantials
children
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 are able to have a better future and they are not compared to other
children
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,
also
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 they are able to live in society by having a respectable job. As an example, In Sri Lanka higher
education
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 is provided by two sources
government
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 and private universities,
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, the
education
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 system
children
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 receive is the same even though the facilities are not. The ultimate end result of both types of colleges is producing
children
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 with a better future.
On the other hand
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, if the
government
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 pays for the free
education
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 of youngsters there will be negative consequences
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 as financial burdens when the authorities have to
fulfill
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 the dream of the entire nation.
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, in the future there will be not enough resources as the country's revenue for studies will fall down gradually. As an example, the budget which is allocated for
education
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 by the
government
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 is fixed and if the rates go higher within the higher poor
people
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 have to pay taxes.
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,
government
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-paying
education
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 should only be for poor families while when other
children
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 have enough money they should attend private institutes. In conclusion, I partially agree that authorities should pay the full amount to
University
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 studies students because doing so will not benefit the country's economy as well as the
education
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 system
children
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 receive will not be equal as there are families who can pay and who cannot.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Higher education
  • University tuition
  • Public good
  • Economic growth
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Merit-based scholarships
  • Need-based grants
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Educational equity
  • Income-contingent loans
  • Graduate tax
  • Financial aid
  • Student loans
  • Subsidize
  • Taxpayer funding
  • Underappreciation
  • Workforce development
  • Access to education
  • Higher learning institutions
  • Government expenditure
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