It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

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Beasts need protection and some kind of species

requires

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the process to save themselves. Persons take initiative to defend the

animals

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from destruction. From my perspective,

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proposition is completely true. It seems undeniable that beasts are

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of the kingdom. At the beginning of the

world

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animals

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are sent to guard the whole ground so that nature can go smoothly in its own way. As a consequence, men have to engage in some sensitive tasks which can provide them to defend against any dangerous incident.

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, some individuals consider not only people can take defensive situations but

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animals

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should be kept for research purposes so that their productivity will increase.

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, dinosaurs are now extinct. If a person takes to create a bar of their mitigate they would still be alive.

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, if an alternative cell was produced, it would create a way to expand their existence.

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, upgraded technology should be implemented whereas there

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a lot of existing systems which can be executed to save the planet.

Animals

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are required to be quarantined in case of falling any sickness. There must be some restrictions to protect them.

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herd

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the herd

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can get the chance to survive in the world.

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, there must be a system to construct some safe places so that beasts can get a secure life.

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, the Amazon jungle has been created naturally and many species are safe in the environment.

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, the kingdom needs a safer place to keep the future for better development. In conclusion,

animals

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need protection so that they will not destroy in the future.

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, people should do

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best to create a safe place for themselves.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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