You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear Dilnura family, I would like to apologise for the noise that I caused on Friday night, it was my birthday party and I had a lot of friends and family members that visited to celebrate
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milestone with me. But I felt late that we bother all our neighbours. We have never done
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kind of distracting act. But at that time my all loved ones came, so they offered to play musical instruments to have a great time. And we made a noise that we did not aware of .
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is one of the reasons I could not stop it. What makes me feel even uneasier is that we made uncomfort for you. Well, to make up for
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disappointment, I am writing these apologies. I am sorry that I shall not be able to stop that loud. I hope you will accept my sincere apologies for interrupting you. Yours sincerely, Laylo Rustamova Rustamova Laylo
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