In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some states, for

people

to buy a

house

is

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instead

to rent one.

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essay considers that the case might be the importance of something to be owned by somebody, which is a positive statement

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because to have

an

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ownership

it

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means to have stability and safety through the years. To be a landlord of something

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means to have the power of doing whatever you want, which will remain for your descendants and nobody will take it from you. Owning a

house

helps you to achieve your goals more

efficient

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, to realize a plan

of

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your career and to make a family. An owned home is the right place to rest, relax, and forget about

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society, traffic and work problems.

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is a positive statement

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because buying a

house

represents having a safe and

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stable place, where nobody will hurt you. The whole layout of the home can be changed and the walls can be

colored

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your preferences, the comfort level is up to your desires. You are free in your choices, and nobody will kick you off,

instead

renting a

house

can lead to a lot of conflicts with your owner

such

as

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permission to modify something in it. It’s important to mention that you don’t need to waste money

for

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renting a home,

instead

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you can invest them in more important things.

Also

, the rent price

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can be increased by the owner, because he’s imposing the rules.

For example

, I’m renting an apartment for five years and I have to live with a broken roof and with

mold

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on the walls, but my owner doesn’t care about

this

problem. So, I need to support all of these consequences till I’ll leave

this

place. In summary, a lot of

people

desire their own

house

for

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stability and protection, which in our days it’s becoming hard to obtain.

However

,

this

can be tackled through the government that promotes low taxes for young

people

and increases

the

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salaries

that

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people

might afford

buying

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to buy

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a

house

instead

of renting one. I agree with

this

statement

,

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because an owned

house

is like a shelter that protects you and your family and

make

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makes

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you free.