Some people believe that humans should be able to use animals for their own benefits, while others argue that the rights of animals should be protected. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

●In our modern life, the majority of individuals emphasize that

people

should be able to utilize creatures in order to satisfy their private profits, while other humans strongly believe that the rights of

animals

should be preserved. From my point of view, all

people

should be taken care

for

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animals

because they

also

have the right to live ●On the one hand, there are benefits of using creatures in their business.

People

can use it to do many things

such

as milking, eating or working. Many poor countries usually use

animals

to aid farmers

mow

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grasses because there are

unexpensive

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inexpensive

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rather than purchasing a mower and it is easily controlled by farmers.

For example

, In the past, all growers in Thailand forced buffaloes to

plow

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the soil over the gigantic rice field before

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the rain

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rain

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season for growing rice. When the rain fell down, the grass grew on the rice paddle.

Then

,

people

will take buffaloes to mow it.

Moreover

, some

business

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businesses

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cages

animals

and construct a zoo for receiving high profits from visitors. ●

On the other hand

, there are

also

advantages

of

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protecting animal rights. Life is necessary for every organism

that

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moral individuals should not do awful

others

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to others

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. As well as

this

, everyone must follow the ethical law

that is

respect other life.

For instance

, a lot of cosmetic companies do experiments on rabbits that are caused animal deficiency and it is

unmoral

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immoral

because it makes them suffer from

the

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nature.

Then

, many companies

are forbade

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by humans because they do not follow the law.

Besides

that, if we do not look after or prevent creatures, they can extinct from our world which

it

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can lead

damage

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to damage

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effects on our ecosystem. ● In conclusion, I strongly believe both sides of the argument

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their positive side.

However

, it seems that should take care

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of animal

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animal

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animals

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because it is ethical and they can maintain the natural environment