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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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Introduction
It is significant for people to represent their professional and personal lives with a risk, which can lead to
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high development.
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 could outweigh the disadvantages.
Body paragraph 1
Nowadays, it is very hard to achieve something in your life. If you want to be a realized person, you need to take some
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 in your professional career and in your life. It is supposed that a hard-work
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 and a lot of studies might help someone to become a well-developed person.
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 it's difficult to achieve all of these and it's necessary for
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plenty of time, we might try to evolve in our society.
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, we live in a comfort zone, without doing anything for our future, but to enrich our personality, we might get out
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 that area.
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, I'm a dentist who worked in Moldova.
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 I wanted to evolve, so I decided to make a change
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 my life and to move
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 another country, which will afford me to become a good worker.
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I'm on the fence with
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, we can obtain whatever we want in our lives, and it seems to be an advantage for us, but
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, taking
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 might lead to a lot of problems, which could destroy our potential and personality.
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, in my job, I can try new methods of treatment to cure people, but if I'm not well-prepared for that changes, it could harm my
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patients
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 way
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worse
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Conclusion
In a nutshell, taking a risk is an awesome thing, but we should keep our eyes on what is happening, and control everything that could destroy us. If I had had more time to study, I would have tried more new treatments
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 my patients and would have
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 without any doubts.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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