Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

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In many societies, a number of
children
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face difficulties to pay attention or concentrating on their studies in school or tutoring. When we think about we were young, most of us suffered in
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situation. The main reasons for
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situation are
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lack of concentration and kids thinking that a
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is boring. These reasons are coped with each other.
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consider that a
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is boring so a lack of concentration
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their
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. To solve
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problem, we should think about how
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can concentrate on or pay attention to their
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.
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, schools and
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should make a study funnier. To make a study funnier,
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have to
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for
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so that younger can enjoy their
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, in the
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from Seoul National
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and Konkuk
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, researchers found that most
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prefer
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held outdoors.
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70% of
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who answered that they prefer
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held outdoors wanted to have outdoor
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every day. In
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research
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, researchers found that
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's concentration in a
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had increased rapidly compared to normal
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.
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,
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and schools should consider with
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of studies. Not all
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, but some
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' teaching
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is very crappy. In the
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from Korea
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and Waseda
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, researchers found that 65% of middle school
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in Korea and 59% of middle school
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in Japan speak that they can not concentrate in their
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due to a tutor's
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. To sum up,
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and schools should make an effort to increase the
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of their studies and ask
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about their preferences for
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, when societies take care of the
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's studying climates,
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will be able to concentrate on their
classes
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distraction
  • Concentration
  • Engagement
  • Curriculum
  • Attention span
  • Learning disorders
  • Interactive learning
  • Personalized learning
  • Supportive learning environment
  • Mental health
  • Organizational skills
  • Educational policy
  • Mindfulness
  • Screen time
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