Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree

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nowadays education is an important part of our life , I'm of the opinion attend in classes should be mandatory due of many reasons
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, attending in class help students to improve their skills , the subject was taught is get the need for a job ,
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in medical school pupils assist doctors and learn from them if they are graduated, they can work in the hospital
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, when their course is not mandatory, most of them tend to other activities that would not help them in the future
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when
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was in my bachelor,
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had one lesson that calls algorithm and the professor told us attending in class is optional so most of us cancelled class and went to cinema and bowling that was so exited to conclude, the basis of my view is based on many reasons that
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write two of them above ,
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believe students should be required to attend classes
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the characters are different from each other
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