In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.Other people are not interested in it saying it's boring Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In our modern life, in many nations majorities humans are becoming interested in searching about the

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of the building or house

which

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they live in. From my point of view, individuals can find new interesting information from anction

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. So, In these

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, I discuss both these will

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and elucidated. On the one hand, some humans strongly believe that

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many

people

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prefer to investigate more

anction

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action

buildings

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because they can obtain more

benefical

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beneficial

information

reletent

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relevant

relating

to historical

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accommadation

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accommodation

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, when they investigate

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action

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accommodation

, they can

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Better study the way of life of ancient

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observing

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buildings

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, it is the best way for historians to study

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history

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because these materials of historical

buildings

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are very

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durable

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these

buildings

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have not lost their beauty yet.

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, many humans

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emphasize

that, every person should know the

history

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of his place of residence which

his

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house because they need to be careful about where they live and can find many resources about their

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accommadation

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accommodation

on the internet.

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, when

people

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want to buy a new house, they are always interested in its

history

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Furthmore

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Furthermore

, the fact that

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know the

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of their home well

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helps scientists a lot because according to experts say that, 70

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of the

life style

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lifestyle

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of ancient

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was organized through their

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accommadation

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accommodation

. In conclusion, more individuals

interested

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are interested

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the

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their

accommadations

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accommodations

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people

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always try to learn

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. Indeed, without

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means no future.

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