Should a city try to preserve its old , historic buildings or destroy them and replace with modern buildings? What is your viewpoint on this ?

It is often argued whether ancient monuments should refurbish for modern structures or preserve for

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. Personally, I agree with the latter view because old buildings are an emblem of distinct culture and heritage . Older sites should be protected because of the reason that these provide us valuable insight

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our roots .

As a result

, people feel a sense of connection with their heritage or background.

For example

, the Golden Temple in Amritsar in Punjab provides knowledge about

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and motivates many Sikh people to visit there daily. Another reason is that many tourists like to visit

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older places , which has resulted in the popularity of these buildings. Along with

this

, tourism gives employment to local people.

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, modern generations associate themselves with their culture

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visiting these sites repeatedly. These sites contain some older tools

also

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For instance

, the weapons that Sikh's used during

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are available in

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.

Therefore

, it is important to take care of old buildings. In conclusion , historic monuments are

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part of human lives and these must be looked after by authorities in order to maintain their beauty

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run.