Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, a small number of
people
consider that doctors and engineers should remain and work
in the countries where they studied, instead
other people
think that jobs shouldn't be required in other states.
To begin
with, the concurence
and the fight for a new posture could lead to Correct your spelling
concurrence
a
several problems between Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
coleagues
. Correct your spelling
colleagues
Also
, a big number of people
who have graduated medicine
or Change preposition
in medicine
engineer
, might not find easily a proper job in their countries, so it is possible that the number of Wrong verb form
engineering
unemployments
to be increased considerably. Another problem might be the lack of similarities between studies in different states. Correct your spelling
unemployment
Although
it is supposed to be the same job, the treatment could be so different, that a lot of workers will not be able to afford it. For instance
, I have been working as a doctor for about 5 years in Romania, and to work
in UK
I must be prepared Correct article usage
the UK
to
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for
their
types of treatment, which differ significantly.
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the
On the contrary
, other people
think more rationally, which promote
the Correct subject-verb agreement
promotes
ideea
that everyone is free to choose where to Correct your spelling
idea
work
. To illustrate, I have
worked in Moldova for a year, and Unnecessary verb
apply
then
I came to Romania. Although
there were some differences between the style of treatment, I got used easily without any doubts.
In the conclusion, I reckon that people
should support the idea that every person could choose where to live and to work
,
because If we are Remove the comma
apply
a
well-skilled specialists, we might succeed easily in our life and prosper Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
the
country. Change preposition
in the
Besides
all of this
, it's important to remain humans
and to help each other.Fix the agreement mistake
human
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