Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a small number of

people

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consider that doctors and engineers should remain and

work

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in the countries where they studied,

instead

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other

people

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think that jobs shouldn't be required in other states.

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with, the

concurence

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concurrence

and the fight for a new posture could lead to

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several problems between

coleagues

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colleagues

.

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, a big number of

people

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who have graduated

medicine

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or

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engineering

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, might not find easily a proper job in their countries, so it is possible that the number of

unemployments

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unemployment

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to be increased considerably. Another problem might be the lack of similarities between studies in different states.

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it is supposed to be the same job, the treatment could be so different, that a lot of workers will not be able to afford it.

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, I have been working as a doctor for about 5 years in Romania, and to

work

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in

UK

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the UK

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I must be prepared

to

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for

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their

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types of treatment, which differ significantly.

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, other

people

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think more rationally, which

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promotes

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the

ideea

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idea

that everyone is free to choose where to

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. To illustrate, I

have

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worked in Moldova for a year, and

then

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I came to Romania.

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there were some differences between the style of treatment, I got used easily without any doubts. In the conclusion, I reckon that

people

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should support the idea that every person could choose where to live and to

work

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,

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because If we are

a

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well-skilled specialists, we might succeed easily in our life and prosper

the

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in the

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country.

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all of

this

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, it's important to remain

humans

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and to help each other.