Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a small number of
people
consider that doctors and engineers should remain and
work
in the countries where they studied,
instead
other
people
think that jobs shouldn't be required in other states.
To begin
with, the
concurence
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concurrence
and the fight for a new posture could lead to
a
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several problems between
coleagues
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colleagues
.
Also
, a big number of
people
who have graduated
medicine
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in medicine
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or
engineer
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engineering
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, might not find easily a proper job in their countries, so it is possible that the number of
unemployments
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to be increased considerably. Another problem might be the lack of similarities between studies in different states.
Although
it is supposed to be the same job, the treatment could be so different, that a lot of workers will not be able to afford it.
For instance
, I have been working as a doctor for about 5 years in Romania, and to
work
in
UK
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I must be prepared
to
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their
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types of treatment, which differ significantly.
On the contrary
, other
people
think more rationally, which
promote
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the
ideea
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idea
that everyone is free to choose where to
work
. To illustrate, I
have
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worked in Moldova for a year, and
then
I came to Romania.
Although
there were some differences between the style of treatment, I got used easily without any doubts. In the conclusion, I reckon that
people
should support the idea that every person could choose where to live and to
work
,
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because If we are
a
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well-skilled specialists, we might succeed easily in our life and prosper
the
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country.
Besides
all of
this
, it's important to remain
humans
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and to help each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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