You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Give details about the concert. How you won the tickets. Why you decided to give it to your friend.

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Dear Vishali, How have you been? I got your letter yesterday, I am feeling elated to know that you are getting summer holidays for 2 weeks. Your timing could not better because I won two tickets to the A.R Rehman concert which is holding in Toronto in the coming month and I want you to come with me. I am really excited to invite you with me. The concert is taking place at Lakeshore stadium on the 3rd of June at 7 PM.

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I could not even think to buy those tickets as they were very expensive.

Last

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night, Mirchi radio FM organise a competition in which competitors has to guess some songs through their background instrumentals.

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, I called them and eventually it went through. I gave them all the right answers and they awarded me these concert tickets. We are friends for the

last

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6 years now and you always have a keen interest in music. I could not think of a better person to go with other than you.

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, your Toronto trip keeps on getting delayed due to your university. I would love that if you can come. Waiting for your

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letter. Regards Disha

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

200 words

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You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Give details about the concert. How you won the tickets. Why you decided to give it to your friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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