Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People are having a hard time reaching
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on whether the number of boys and girls in all subjects of
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should be equal. From my perspective, I completely disagree with
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that the number of male
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should be as many as
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a female
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in every subject. Some people tend to think that men
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could do something very well that was believed previously
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was only done by women, and vice versa. As far as I am concerned,
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, we must recognize the fact
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some kinds of jobs are only fit for
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a particular
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gender.
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, it is consensus that
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the majority of nurses in hospitals consist of females
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of males. If
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recruit boys as many as girls, it would be difficult for many boys to find decent jobs after graduation. Obviously, there are several merits that there are
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of men and women learning different majors in
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.
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, after graduation,
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would not be worried about finding jobs hardly because
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accept
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according to the marketing requirements.
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, there would be
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students
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giving up their subjects due to the reason that
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accepted them for balancing the proportion of gender.
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, women are good at taking care of patients so
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they may get higher
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than men in the nursing major.
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,
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on building up confidence or even abandon their
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studies
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. In conclusion, my view is
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should not
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the same number of male and female
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in every subject.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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