More and more people want to own items by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or positive impact?
In the modern era of globalization, many individuals wish to buy products from international brands. In my
opinion
there are several reasons to do Add a comma
,opinion
this
, and it is not so beneficial to do so. Both the reason and my opinon
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opinion
opinions
are discuss
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are discussed
are discussing
further
.
Discussing the causes on
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of
public
using expensive products, the foremost one is that an individual Add an article
the public
want
to Change the verb form
wants
showoff
, or It is like a status symbol these days. Correct your spelling
show off
Therefore
, to look rich and sucessfull
in life, the crowd often buy these things. A good illustration is that on days like Boxing day or Black Friday, Correct your spelling
successful
crowd
gather around big malls to buy international products at Fix the agreement mistake
crowds
cheaper
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a cheaper
rate
to look rich. Fix the agreement mistake
rates
In addition
to this
, these big recognized companies had created a monopoly due to which public
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the public
are
forced to buy Change the verb form
is
it
. They do Correct pronoun usage
them
this
to increase their annual revenue,
and finish the competition Remove the comma
apply
from
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in
market
. Add an article
the market
For instance
, Apple's laptop does not allow Add an article
the user
a user
user
to connect to an Fix the agreement mistake
users
andriod
device, in order to connect an individual needs to buy an Correct your spelling
android
Andriod
iphone
.
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iPhone
Furthermore
, Due to high in
demand, scammers are making Change preposition
apply
first
-copy of these famous items. As a result
, a
individual cannot Change the article
an
differniate
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differentiate
buying
these fake items at Change preposition
between buying
lower
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a lower
price
. Fix the agreement mistake
prices
For example
, fake Apple's
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Apple
airpods
are easily Correct your spelling
AirPods
avaialbe
on Correct your spelling
available
marketplace
or online. Correct article usage
the marketplace
Moreover
, humans are so obessed
with these things that they overspend. For illustration, there are many Correct your spelling
obsessed
ladies
bag companies Change noun form
ladies'
lady's
who
sell their Correct pronoun usage
that
product
at a whopping price.
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products
Thus
, to conclude, it can be finally
commented that there are many downside
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downsides
do
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doing
this
. The reason and the merits of doing it would be creating a fake society image, monopoly
in Add an article
a monopoly
the monopoly
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the maket
maket
and overspending for Correct your spelling
market
make
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the seeker
a seeker
seeker
to Fix the agreement mistake
seekers
purchage
these things.Correct your spelling
purchase
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