More and more people want to own items by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or positive impact?

In the modern era of globalization, many individuals wish to buy products from international brands. In my
opinion
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there are several reasons to do
this
, and it is not so beneficial to do so. Both the reason and my
opinon
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further
. Discussing the causes
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public
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using expensive products, the foremost one is that an individual
want
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to
showoff
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, or It is like a status symbol these days.
Therefore
, to look rich and
sucessfull
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successful
in life, the crowd often buy these things. A good illustration is that on days like Boxing day or Black Friday,
crowd
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gather around big malls to buy international products at
cheaper
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rate
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to look rich.
In addition
to
this
, these big recognized companies had created a monopoly due to which
public
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are
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forced to buy
it
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. They do
this
to increase their annual revenue
,
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and finish the competition
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market
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the market
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.
For instance
, Apple's laptop does not allow
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the user
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user
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users
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to connect to an
andriod
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android
Andriod
device, in order to connect an individual needs to buy an
iphone
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iPhone
.
Furthermore
, Due to high
in
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demand, scammers are making
first
-copy of these famous items.
As a result
,
a
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individual cannot
differniate
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differentiate
buying
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between buying
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these fake items at
lower
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price
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prices
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.
For example
, fake
Apple's
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Apple
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airpods
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AirPods
are easily
avaialbe
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available
on
marketplace
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the marketplace
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or online.
Moreover
, humans are so
obessed
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obsessed
with these things that they overspend. For illustration, there are many
ladies
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bag companies
who
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sell their
product
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products
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at a whopping price.
Thus
, to conclude, it can be
finally
commented that there are many
downside
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to
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this
. The reason and the merits of doing it would be creating a fake society image,
monopoly
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a monopoly
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in
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the maket
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maket
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market
make
and overspending for
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the seeker
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seeker
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seekers
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to
purchage
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purchase
these things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prestigious
  • luxury
  • prevalent
  • trendsetter
  • aspiration
  • exclusivity
  • craftsmanship
  • sustainable
  • conspicuous consumption
  • status symbol
  • brand loyalty
  • consumerism
  • advertising
  • marketing
  • economic growth
  • wealth disparity
  • materialistic
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