More and more people want to own items by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or positive impact?

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In the modern era of globalization, many individuals wish to buy products from international brands. In my

opinion

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there are several reasons to do

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, and it is not so beneficial to do so. Both the reason and my

opinon

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opinion

opinions

are discuss

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further

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. Discussing the causes

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public

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the public

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using expensive products, the foremost one is that an individual

want

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wants

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showoff

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show off

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, or It is like a status symbol these days.

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, to look rich and

sucessfull

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successful

in life, the crowd often buy these things. A good illustration is that on days like Boxing day or Black Friday,

crowd

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gather around big malls to buy international products at

cheaper

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a cheaper

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rate

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rates

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to look rich.

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this

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, these big recognized companies had created a monopoly due to which

public

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the public

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are

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forced to buy

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them

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. They do

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to increase their annual revenue

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and finish the competition

from

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market

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the market

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, Apple's laptop does not allow

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the user

a user

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user

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to connect to an

andriod

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android

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device, in order to connect an individual needs to buy an

iphone

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iPhone

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, Due to high

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demand, scammers are making

first

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-copy of these famous items.

As a result

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individual cannot

differniate

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differentiate

buying

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between buying

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these fake items at

lower

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a lower

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price

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prices

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, fake

Apple's

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Apple

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airpods

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AirPods

are easily

avaialbe

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available

marketplace

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the marketplace

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or online.

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, humans are so

obessed

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obsessed

with these things that they overspend. For illustration, there are many

ladies

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bag companies

who

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that

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sell their

product

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products

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at a whopping price.

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, to conclude, it can be

finally

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commented that there are many

downside

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this

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. The reason and the merits of doing it would be creating a fake society image,

monopoly

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a monopoly

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the maket

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maket

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market

make

and overspending for

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the seeker

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seeker

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seekers

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purchage

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purchase

these things.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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prestigious
luxury
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conspicuous consumption
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