You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • explain what you like about his new house • tell what you enjoyed most during your staying • suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Dear Joy,

Firstly

, thank you for being a wonderful host and for your delicious food. It was an unforgettable day in my life that we spent in your new

home

with our friends. I am so proud to hear that you designed the interior of the

home

. It’s luxurious as well as contemporary. the way design your backyard is awesome and very useful. The modern security system

also

makes your

home

feel safe when you go on vacation. I am glad to have the address of the company that installs the security system, which may require in my new

home

. The most enjoyable moment of the stay was the barbecue and campfire night. It was amazing and we found our old school days. I can’t believe we spent all night in the garden without any proper winter jackets. The cork and food were amazing at the party. We were discussing the

meeting, how about making it in my new farmhouse in Spain, which is beautiful and spacious. Let’s have a discussion among the group. I can’t wait for the

party With love Jennifer

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

185 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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