Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some part of the population

think

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that the government should invest a part of the people's

money

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in

the

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public services, but others

are not agree

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do not agree

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with

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statement. I reckon that it could be a positive and a negative thing. Nowadays, our society needs our investment and help. We can see a lot of problems in different areas

such

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as the bad quality of the school, medical care system and

of

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apply

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the

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roads, which destroy the whole infrastructure of the city.

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it's a hard job to increase considerably the condition of the hospital, the government should take

small

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a small

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cuantity

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quantity

of

money

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from the population and

to

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apply

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invest in public services.

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, in the UK, the government takes a certain percentage of

money

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from the workers and

use

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them properly, investing them in the country's needs. In fact,

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prosper

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significantly the wealth of the state. My take on the

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statement, people might disagree with high taxes because

pleny

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plenty

of them are living in a corrupted state, and don'

t

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earn much

money

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to be able to live normally.

Population

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The population

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don'

t

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believe that their

money

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will go to the state's needs.

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, if they had earned much more

money

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for a better life, they wouldn'

t

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have rejected that kind of

taxes

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tax

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.

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, I live in a poor country where the level of

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corruption is high.

Meanwhile

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the salaries are too small,

my

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and my

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nation can'

t

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afford

paying

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to pay

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high taxes. In a nutshell, I think it's a good idea to contribute

for

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to

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our country, but we should be well informed

where

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about where

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the

money

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are

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is

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going and for what they were used.