Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some part of the population
think
that the government should invest a part of the people's Change the verb form
thinks
money
in the
public services, but others Correct article usage
apply
are not agree
with Change the verb form
do not agree
this
statement. I reckon that it could be a positive and a negative thing.
Nowadays, our society needs our investment and help. We can see a lot of problems in different areas such
as the bad quality of the school, medical care system and of
Change preposition
apply
the
roads, which destroy the whole infrastructure of the city. Correct article usage
apply
Although
it's a hard job to increase considerably the condition of the hospital, the government should take small
Correct article usage
a small
cuantity
of Correct your spelling
quantity
money
from the population and to
invest in public services. Change the verb form
apply
For instance
, in the UK, the government takes a certain percentage of money
from the workers and use
them properly, investing them in the country's needs. In fact, Correct subject-verb agreement
uses
this
prosper
significantly the wealth of the state.
My take on the Change the verb form
prospers
second
statement, people might disagree with high taxes because pleny
of them are living in a corrupted state, and don'Correct your spelling
plenty
t
earn much money
to be able to live normally. Population
don'Correct article usage
The population
t
believe that their money
will go to the state's needs. Nevertheless
, if they had earned much more money
for a better life, they wouldn't
have rejected that kind of taxes
. Fix the agreement mistake
tax
For example
, I live in a poor country where the level of the
corruption is high. Correct article usage
apply
Meanwhile
the salaries are too small, Add a comma
,Meanwhile
my
nation can'Correct word choice
and my
t
afford paying
high taxes.
In a nutshell, I think it's a good idea to contribute Change the verb form
to pay
for
our country, but we should be well informed Change preposition
to
where
the Change preposition
about where
money
are
going and for what they were used.Change the verb form
is
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